Chapter 9 will be the longest chapter I will have done, so please be patient. As of now, it is around 10k words. I intend to make it somewhere between 30k to 40k, so it'll take a while.

Roflpanzer, my great PAL, has made me this awesome poster for my fic! You should give him credits!

I reworked the 'introduction' part of chapter 1 to better fit the ending I have envisioned for my story. Check it out and tell me what you think!

Sp, you all know RoflPanzer, right? Gut who made my current cover art? Well, he's making a new one! And this time, the characters won't be silhouettes! When it is finished, you will see the main characters (Zaita not included for space purposes) in all their glory! Hopefully, you guys'll find it as good as I do.

This is basically what Goldwreath looks like, without the kevlar vest.

You'll notice the lack of a mane, as I had to use the mane slot to make the plumes of the helmet.

Okay, so, apparently a strong point of mine in my story is making the 'in-between' times bot boring.

However, my weak point is character development.

So, here's what I ask: Can you guys help me find out how to properly convey a character's emotions without making it sound bland or simple? I'll really need to know for when I write Char. dev. chapters.

I don't know about you guys, but art work numbering at around four regarding my fic really kind of sucks.

So, if anyone would be willing to create some, that would be great. Note that this is not an effort that will be paid for, so please only take this on if you're really bored and have nothing whatsoever to do.

If anyone at all is willing to do this, the most I can do is give you credits at the final 'credits' chapter of my story.

Okay, so, chapter 7 is finished, NOT OUT, but finished.

Why am I telling you this? So you can read the text below:

Chapter 7 is fairly long, almost as much as chapter 5. In terms of char. dev., I suppose you could say I made SOME progress. Really, though, this chapter was more on introducing the character to the hell that is Roam.

After almost a month of writing, New Roam is still in it's infancy. I remember that tuesday morning, and the idea that just popped into my head:

"Why not write a fanfic?"

And so I did. And though it hasn't reached the peak of it's popularity nor do many people even know about it yet, I know that someday it will be great.

Hopefully, YOU who have taken the time to help me improve on this story, chapter by chapter, will continue to help me in the future.