For Doodle, which of these two do you think is better?

Majestic and Paradisical
or
Peaceful and Serene

Also a few more themes:

Another 'faction' later on
Yet another faction theme, revealed later on

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Okay, I've added the guy's theme to my musical them compilation chapter.

Predator - In case you get too lazy to go to the chapter XD

I have just added another musical theme for one of the main characters.

Check it out here.

I have found the musical theme for a certain faction which will be revealed later on in the story.

Secret faction

Ok, well, due to my upcoming periodical exams, I will only be able to release chapter 11 in about another week or so.

Sorry to keep you guys waiting. I'm trying to squeeze in as much writing time as I can.

Oh, on an unrelated matter, I found the 'Legion' faction theme: Legion theme

Okay, so, here's the deal. I'd like someone, anyone at all who has read my story, to write a comprehensive critique pointing out my strong points and weak points. If possible, this critique should have suggestions on how to make the story better. I am asking because I would really like my story to become a recognized (and possibly very large) FOE sidefic. But of course, I need to improve.

So to anyone who can write such a critique, please do so.

Thanks in advance.

Okay, so, I'd like somepony to please write a written critique about my story "New Roam". I am asking for this because I'd like people, my readers, to point out what they find lacking in the chapters so that I may add them later on. Comments on writing and dialogue and other story elements are highly encouraged.

Thanks.

Okay, so, I want to join in the event. Maybe I could use it to get my fic more popular. But I just have one question:

Do I have to start a NEW fiction for the sake of this event, or can I just throw my current fic (New Roam) at them? The contest says I need at least 50k words, but I have 144k already.

Please help me out here. Thanks.

I added/changed some music in the 'music' section of my chapters.

I changed the 'Ending' theme.

Also, could someone help me look for a Legion faction theme?

I have edited/revised/ added new things/ deleted stuff for the first two chapters of my story. Basically I will read all my published chapters, then I will edit them until they are worthy of EqD. If you have the time, go over them again!

As of now, 7/9/2012, I have only edited chapters 1 and 2