• Member Since 22nd May, 2012
  • offline last seen Nov 14th, 2012

Sherlotta


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After beeing defeated by the Mane6, Luna returned to Canterlot. On her first day there she finds a letter from her sister. What does it say? Read it to know.
I wrote this story to practise my writing skills. I'm not good at adding feelings to stories, so I gave it a try. English isn't my native language, I'm sorry for any spelling or grammar errors. Feel free to list them, I can only get better. And to be honest, I used Google translator for some phrases (shame on me). ^.^
I would appreciate it, if you give feedback, because I really want to improve my wrinting and my English.

~Edit~
Fixed the paragraph problem and some spelling errors.

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