Re Write of Chapter 6 · 5:13pm Jan 26th, 2018
Rewrite of chapter 6 … more like revamp i am having a writer's block and i'm not satisfied with how this chapter is turning out i was abou 7000 words in and read it again and it was stale and stilted as well as forced it had no flow to anyone willing to give me pointers on how to make a scene pop i would be more than willing to listen.
To summarize the chapter so far which is not much in reality so here we go.