After listening to people, Im planning to make chapter 5 longer, more 2000 words etc. So Have a short exert from the next chapter:

Twilight had just sat quietly for several minutes muttering to herself. In the end she had stood up “While I think there are many things I don’t quite understand, I trust both the princess’s and they are far more knowledgable than I am ...”

Very short but hey.

Heya readers, if you read this then thanks, and I just wanted to pose a simple question. What do you think of the story as short as it is so far.

Also I want to see who wants to guess where its heading