Some Writing Scraps · 7:40am Jan 10th, 2013
So, my good friend and editor was helping a fellow brony out by giving him some writing exercises. He asked me to read them and give feedback, and then asked me if I would like to join in. I decided "why not?," I could always use the practice. So, I was given a prompt to do a follow up to the original scene, involving RD saving Rarity. The prompt was Sweetie notices Rarity begins acting odd towards Rainbow Dash and becomes confused and seeks out advice. The stipulation? First person. No