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TDR


In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move.

Nov
1st
2011

Finaly the rock ... has punned again. · 7:49pm Nov 1st, 2011

Chapter 4 is up. this will be a a hiatus for a bit as i go back and redo chapters 1-3 and maybe see more stuff i need to clean in 4.

I am still trying to get my story posted on EQD but it seems i need a lot of work still. I've dropped the italics as speach for chapter 4. I also brought in a line break when the time line shifted.

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Oct
31st
2011

Chapter 4 · 5:01pm Oct 31st, 2011

Chapter 4 is nearly done i just need to edit the crap out of it . Should be up either tonight or some time tommorow.

just got the mail back from EQD . seems the work needs more work... heh . thats fine like any critique I plan to alter the problems I need to go back and redo the lot of it . Might delay chapter 5 a bit doing that though but with luck I can make the story cleaner still. would'nt mind help if any ones offering .

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Oct
30th
2011

edited chapter one again. · 9:37am Oct 30th, 2011

Ive submitted my story to EQD . Did a little reworking of the first chapter rewording some run ons and some other errors i found . likely going to do that a few dozen more times at this rate . everything i look through the chapters i find something else that needs fixing no matter how many times i proof read it before posting..

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Oct
29th
2011

chapter 3 is up · 10:13pm Oct 29th, 2011

I really need to cut this out . i will burn out before i finish if i keep tossing out the stories. every day like this.

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Oct
29th
2011

repaired · 7:52am Oct 29th, 2011

Alright spent a good bit of time going over the first SiS post . Should be cleaner and have a better flow to it as well as haveing many of the mistakes repaired . It was also altered slightly to make it more than a one shot like i intended.

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Oct
28th
2011

second posting. · 4:06pm Oct 28th, 2011

Alright i put up part two and went over it at least 3 times reworked words adjusted how things sounded. removed double spaces and tried to make sure everything was good.

I plan to build up to everything from the first one. You know how it ends heres how it began sort of deal. though i do have a few ideas on how it will end too i might work on.

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Oct
27th
2011

first rant · 12:21pm Oct 27th, 2011

Quite annoying I am greatly tired but the ideas for stories keep spinning though my head. So much so i have dificulted concentrating on the second parts which are all saved in progresson my flash drive.
And yet i have easily four or five more ideas buzzing around in my brain i need to bring out..... alas so much to do , so much i want to do and so little time i have to do the want .

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