Okay, I am nearly done with editing the next chapter and I should have it up at the latest by tomorrow morning. RIght now I'm just taking a break since it is a pain in the ass reading something like twenty times trying to figure out why something just doesn't sound right. Writer's have it hard writing something good, but editors have a hard job too as they have to make a writer's lump of coal into a diamond and sometimes that takes a lot of work. This chapter is one that is taking a lot of work

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So yeah I got a message from my editor today explaining what happened and I really hope for the best for them. I won't go into detail about what they said, it was probably most likely meant to be private, but they have a lot of crap to deal with in life right now so I'm not mad at them or anything. I do wish I got even a short reply sooner, but I understand that real life sucks at times and I hope for the best for them and will keep them in my prayers.

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So yeah, as the title suggests, the edited chapter 2 is now up. Mind you I did the editing myself so it may not be the greatest and I didn't know what to cut, if any, for sounding too dry since I was trying to explain the few things that I could fit in decently without completely clogging of the story flow. I will do my best to get the other 3 chapters that I have done finished editing and posted this weekend, but this chapter took a lot longer than I though it would so it may take me the rest

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So yeah, as the title says I am really frustrated right now. I have a toxic enough environment that I live in, but no matter where I turn online it seems every single community that was once peaceful and friendly, or should be so considering the subject matter, is turning toxic as well. That right that has been strangling my creativity a lot lately though I try my best to ignore it.

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I wanted to let everyone know that yes there are updates incoming so please don't panic. The next two chapters are actually now finished and awaiting editing so they will be published as soon as they are completed. I'm not the best writer, and I know that, so my editor has their work cut out for them.

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So yeah, as it says the Chapter 1 rewrite is done and posted with chapter 2 being about finished though being Mother's Day I won't be home for awhile so won't get much work done on it. I should have both Chapter 2 and 3 done by next weekend, I hope. The rewrites are much harder than I thought they were going to be and much larger to. Chapter 1 itself is longer than all 3 of the original chapters combined. I really wasn't planning on changing much, just patching the flow, but sadly plans never

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Ok, so you all probably know, I'm trying my best to use all the advice given to me for the story which prompted a rewrite of what I have. I'm currently at, say 90% of the way done with only another scene or two to do depending on where I stop chapter 1. I have a lot of ideas for the story and some of the advice from people have changed some of them and other advice has me rethinking some things. I could really use everyone's opinions on a few things to see what everyone would like to see more.

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A Whole New World Chapter 3 Commentary (Beware the spiders! I mean Spoilers!)

Really though, beware the spiders too.

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