After a lot of internal debate and frustration I've decided I'm going to rewrite Zap Apples. I'm going to title the old chapters (original) xxxxx

I'll get started over the next month and it's more for new readers or dedicated readers who agree it's a bit messy. I figure if I can get the first six chapters done the rest will flow easier since it's mostly grammar and showing issues I now know about.

Since I'm Writing three Stories Its getting confusing So for the next couple days I'm going to focus on the next chapter of fruit falls before I go to a World of Discord / chaos

Since I read an article on show don't tell my writing has been improving greatly over the last few chapters I've written in most of my stories. This bodes well for you and my future readers.
Just saying

Anypony who can leave me a comment on A night with the girls
is be ever so greatful for constructive criticism on it, save for grammar

I read several articles on this over the past hour and I strongly believe I have to rewrite and post certain chapters to a couple stories. I'll also be working the technique into my stories more.

I'll keep you all up to date

I was almost ready to post the next chapter of discord however right now I'm at work and I really think a lot about my writing.

I strongly believe I should wait, maybe even a week, before I post the next chapter just because I want there to be more. ..
detail and feeling to it.

I've beeln thhking about rewriting several of Zap Apples Should I do it or should I Just leave than be?

Thanks to a fantastic reader and growing amino I'll be doing one chapter a week for each of my stories.

Monday: arcane illness

Wednesday: world with discord

Friday: forbidden fruits.

Thanks to sun struck for the idea.
My brain was in overload writing them all at the same time, hopefully this will help

Wow, I was looking back and never described Quill, one of the growing background characters in the story!

Quill:

Quill photo

Lime:

Lime Photo

Newest chapter is ready but I need a prereader who is preferably female and knows what girl-nights are like. Since I'm a guy I'm doing the best I can but can only go so far...