This is a rewrite of my story Equestria Broken but in first person instead of third person. I didn't really like the way the story was being written so a good friend of mine suggested for me to try something new. I'm really liking how it's coming out so I decided to post it.

This is a grimdark MLP story in an alternate universe. King Sombra rules the land which is decimated by plague, starvation and a rebellion uprising. Clout, an introverted thief who lives his life in the shadows, is forced into circumstances he is going to have to learn how to navigate with the help of two ponies he calls stalkers.

The original story is here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/254163/equestria-broken
Coverart is by Kirionek on DeviantArt

In this alternate universe of MLP, peace and prosperity are things of dreams. With King Sombra and Discord holding the reins of Equestria, they have driven the people to starvation and unrest. A rebellion group has been gathering to overthrow the kings but with their control, it has been difficult. The only hope they can find to take Sombra down is to steal the Alicorn Amulet from off his neck and to find what happened to the fabled alicorn princesses so they could use their powers to remove Discord from the throne.

(Mash up of MLP and my favorite game Thief)

Cover art drawn by Kirionek on DeviantArt.

EB Google Docs Data File --> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N3U91RhHv5-24qmZzc9TBjMUHX_1JU0OznzxoQ0WLfc/edit?usp=sharing
NOTE: This is a link list of all the EB Google Doc files I've used. Yes, this does have the next chapter that I'm working on. It is a raw file and not at all finished yet!! It is clearly marked as WIP so read spoilers (or not as what's there may get edited out before being published) at your own risk!

Youtube music playlist including all songs quoted at the beginning of each chapter:
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLxBMqmCOqWJAb52s1Y1MFdia56eBuyPa9