I don't have the proper amount of words to explain this story in any manner. All i can say is that this is a Rarity and Fluttershy shipping fic, its supposed to be touching, and it's G rated.
Just read it. :)
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Oi, people following this story. this was submitted to eqd and has been sent back for some editing work, so to any who see this; the story is about to change a bit, i don't think anything to significant, but ye... keep an eye out. i'll upload the edited thing as a new chapter and delete the old one so that it appears in people's inbox.
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This was a collaborative effort between myself and Halendor960. It took us about a month to write, and it was worth it.
Unlike our last collaborative efforts, we really wanted to write something of good quality. We wanted to write something that would truly suck the reader into the story, and it is my belief that we have achieved that goal.
Credit for writing the majority of the story goes to Halendor960.
However tbh, i'm not trying to be a dick to Halendor nor am trying to toot my own horn (excuse pun), this story would be very different if not for our/my editing, it would be a lot simpler, and quite a bit less descriptive. writing took about 1 week, editing was about 3.
Some may wonder why it says Co-Written by Me, and that is because, i not only edited it, but also did write a few parts. Of actual writing i wrote the Sauna scene, and the Restaurant scene (up until Rarity's focus is broken by the waiter and has to look over the menu)
thank you to: http://closer-to-the-sun.deviantart.com/ for allowing me to use the picture i touched up.
Thank you for reading
