• Member Since 11th Dec, 2013
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Georelic35


I decided to make a profile after reading tons of stories and some of them asked for critism so here i am. The avatar is from the story Gamer god which i found quite interesting

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As the Magic of True Friendship is released from the Harmony chest, the energies start to change things in other worlds. Creatures start to question things they shouldn't question. One specefic individual is The Iron Pegasus.

The Iron Pegasus is essential to Team Inferno.
He is fast, strong and single minded. He is everything Team Inferno needs, to beat Team Rainbow, in the constant war for cosmic control. But what happens when such a fundamental piece, starts to question his life and the goals of his "Team".
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So... Finally trying to sack up and create a story of my own.
Any critism, corrections and just general help is greatly appreciated.
And i will apologise in advance about gramatical errors, i suck at punctuation and english in general.
Also, let me know what you think about the story and the chapters in the comments.
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This is a Crossover between:
My Little Pony Friendship is Magic
Robot Unicorn Attack 2

Chapters (1)