Gentlemen. · 3:16am Nov 12th, 2012
The last of the major rewrites had been completed. Just wanted you to know...
I'll be replacing the old chapters when the new ones are all pre-read and good to go.
Notes: Chapter 2
1) A new scene where the gang stops at Fluttershy's is added.
2) A whole new fight scene between the Wanderer and abominations was added.
3) Expanded on the Wanderer meets fillies scene. He observes them for awhile first before poop meets ventination device.