Up Coming Rewrites! · 10:00am May 31st, 2012
Upon starting chapter 11 I couldn’t help but come to an unsettling conclusion. At some point during the writing of this story I appear to have lost track of what I was trying to do. This was supposed to be a Pinkie Dash story, yet the two have barely shared two scenes together thus far. In fact, Dash, who was supposed to be the title character of the whole thing, has barely had any characterization outside of “Oh dear I’m having a terrible nightmare. Somepony ought to do something about