First thing first....this is my first fanfic ever so be kind to me in your criticism but don't be afraid that you may hurt my feelings I can take it. Also I hope people will like my story and how I see some of MLP FIM characters (though following them exactly will be hard for me...I think) anyways you're reading this for the description of the story. The first chapter has be edited (only grammar problems fixed and a few other) still the same as before but without most if not all of the problems before.

Vigilant is a young stallion who retires from the Royal Equestrian Army after a tragedy . He moves to Ponyville to return to civilian life, all he wanted to do was live is life in peace. Though living in Ponyville you don't tend to live a normal life. He rescues a young filly, he reunites with an old friend from flight school, he discovers a possible Coup...With internal war on the brink of happening will Vigilant stay as a Civilian or will he return to being a Soldier to protect those he love and the Princesses from a power that is even more powerful than they are?

Hope that description caught your attention... again hope yall enjoy my first story (well fan fic) I ever wrote.
(I'll also update the category and characters as I go aaand the Romance is not the main focus of the story)

Editor/Proofreader TehSporkBandit