Thanks to ShadowBlades for editing the story it's on approval and it should be readable and ready in a couple minutes.
So see ya!
Coffe a day, keeps the world around me grey.
This just on my maybe list, but I need to know if this is a good description.
At an abandoned old facility in Ponyville, lies a orange coat, purple mane Pegasus named Scootaloo. Who so happens get dragged into an arson investigation as the key suspect.
So what's your thoughts on this?
Waking up to find the house on fire. Scootaloo quickly dodge from her bed, landing onto the floor to avoid the smoke going into her nozzle.
She covered her mouth, to avoid the smoke from filling up her lungs. “Hello, any pony in here!” she shouted.
Scootaloo crawl through the smoke, but a ceiling collapsed, blocking the only exit out of the burning building.
Scootaloo collapsed into a coughing fit. “PLEASE SOME PONY HELP ME!!”
Breathe kid
Please read my new story Spike's friend the first chapter is quick, but I making another chapter to cover that.