Tense · 10:19pm Jun 24th, 2012
Have you ever written something then gone back a few days later and realized that you went from past to present to future in the same sentence?
"In this world, Elwood, you must be oh so smart or oh so pleasant." Well for years I was smart. I recommend pleasant.
Have you ever written something then gone back a few days later and realized that you went from past to present to future in the same sentence?
This wedding it's totally taking all of my time. I will do what I can and promise to spend at least three days doing nothing but writing and editing.
The princess are not goddesses. Rather they are ponifications of abstract concepts.
if there is a spirit of chaos us there also a spirit of justice, wisdom, fate...?
Story time!
I stopped at 7-11 for drinks and a man carrying a gas can asked for money for fuel. I gave him the four dollars I had in my wallet.
one year ago I would not have done this!
Once I was on the road again I realized that I could have filled it for him with my credit card.
YAY! Wedding time!
No it isn't my wedding, It's my sisters, which is better cause I get all the party with none of the commitment.
But why am I telling you this you ask?
There is no reason... I just want to. This won't affect my output, either with the work I am doing on my own stories or with those I am collaborating on.
Go out and have a mead, you can thank me later.
Your faithful drinking buddy,
Honey Mead
I want to get Chronicle on EQD. That means I need YOUR help. If you have the skills of an editor and want to help than Comment or PM me.
I am going to be honest with you guys. Chronicle has not gone the way I originally imagined it would. I am sure that some of you have noticed this, especially those of you who have been reading since it was first posted. I got swept up in the events and characters and whenever I tried to draw things back to my original plan it never felt right. I have probably deleted as much text as I have published on this site. I wish I had saved it though. What I am trying to say is that I appologize to all
I have recently picked up an editor for 'Rolling Bones'. He has graciously gone back and helped me rework the Prologue. But I do not expect you all to reread the entire thing just for a few edits so here is a summery of the important changes.
Clarification has been made to the ages of the main cast.
---They were not the same age as the CMC's when they went to the casino.
Do you ever get the feeling that you're being watched?
It would be wonderful if I could draw. There are so any scenes in my story that I want to show to the audience. a prime example is the armor worn by General Bullrunner. When I try to describe I am never left feeling satisfied with the resulting paragraph. If I had pictures to use with the writing I could get away with a more cursory description that does enough without interrupting the flow of the read.
As hard as writing is in general, writing conversation is ten times worse. Every time you change characters you have to change tone and dialect and speech patterns. Then you have to come up with what you want/need them to say. I admire those authors who can just create characters and write good solid conversations.