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Oh god, that's hilarious.
I did so not think of that, but I shall add it as a Bad Ending.

You people keep inspiring me.

759814>>759814 Really my primary concern is that with her decrease in mass she'll pull off something stupid and reach escape velocity

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Hehe. My first reviewer yesterday lamented how Rainbow seemed to keep her mass and should have her own gravity field by now.

Was it clear that she did not compress her mass, but instead uses the inborn "let stuff float" of a pegasus to replace her lost strength?

759801 Your Welcome.
I gave it a read and I like how you keep with the proper scientific aspect of resizing rather than just letting it happen. I've always been a fan of the genre but when people use it with proper aspects it's usually an attention grabber.

Thank you for favoriting my story, though it's undergoing some serious rewrites right now.

Again, thank you and have a nice day.