Pinkamena: OMG!!!!! I M SOOOOOOOO EXIDED FOR CHAPTER 2!!!!!
There will be a chapter 2 right?!?!?!?

2374472 yeppers. I'll do it whenever I feel like it.

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha derp face!!!!!! Me happy. I hope Butchershy doesn't find out about me using this.....
>>thepurplemaniac

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Hello, sir or madam!

I enjoyed the story, mostly because of Pinkamena (she's so very, very fine), but that's not the point of this comment.

I know you said you'd only do two chapters, but I'md still like to ask this question.

Would you be willing to allow me to edit this and fix up some of the grammar mistakes, in an attempt to make things flow a bit better?

If you don't, I understand, but I still thought I'd take a shot and ask.

Thanks for your time.

Nice hot pic for a cover

Pinkamena: Wow. You really... like me?!?! I am sooooo happy But i agree. There are some grammer in here and i think it would be helpful to change that

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2374882
I luv your picture. it makes me lol

2376861 thnx

2376575 sure. i don't mind. ^^

2376594 thnx

2376895 i can see your picture saying that...EPIC LOL

2376908

Cool!
I'll get it done, then I'll PM it back later!

2377277 ok

Have seen Pinkie Pie, getting shipped with her r63. But haven't seen Pinkamena getting shipped with her r63. You got my attention. Also, you might want to straighten up your story.

2378017

Straightened, friend, and hopefully to your liking!

Also, just a note, R63 is the genderbender.

2393744 Didn't notice I wrote r34 instead of r63.

2393845

We all make mistakes, friend!

2393867 Yeah, we do. Maybe I need to lay off the r34 a bit so I don't make the same mistake.

2393877

Please.
Once one is in the R34, they don't just "get off".

Ew, bad pun.

2393886 Yeah, no exception.

i like and i like the story Cupcakes then again im crazy and insane like Pinkameina

2400580 yeah XD

2401345 please update or I'll make you into cupcakes

2417476 lol done worried. it will be updated very soon.

2417511 I sure hope so I don't want to turn you into cupcakes

Moar! but don't rush please, this story has lots of potential!

2498155 thnx for liking the story. chapter 2 will be up soon.