My Little Saw, Friendship is Torture
written by Jigsaw-pony
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why did she still die
?
2410280 Must...resist the urge to spoil it for you. Just wait awhile util you get to the end and you'll see.
2410966 fine... but you better have a good reason
2415897 It's grimdark is it not? I mean I hope that this didn't make you think the story was bad or anything because it is supposed to be sad and dark.
Well that was certainly dark, but not the darkest thing I've ever read. I liked it actually. You added essential details that created a good visual image. Need to read more now, which is why I don't like starting an unfinished story. Only thing that bothered me, because I'm OCD, is the large paragraph near the end. I just feel it should be chopped up, but that's the OCD speaking.
Other than my OCD'ness and unfinished-story pet peeve, it was an excellent story.
2418535 Thank you, I will chop up the story and get to posting chapter two tonight if i can.
damn...
Why did Jigsaw kill Pinkie when she succeeded with the test? That feels more like something Hoffman would do.