Interesting start, but a little short and vague. I'll track and follow to see where you're going with this.

not bad

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Tell that to the 13 people who disliked it.

2351442 haters are going to hate just dont let that stop you

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It's suppose to be vague, I was trying to take my time on this and think it through. But, now...well...

2351483 Don't get discouraged by the asshats that down vote without commenting. I like the way it's going. The vagueness only makes me want to see more. I will say it was a little short, but you go with what you're comfortable with. Please don't let the haters stop you from writing.

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Thanks, the both of you.