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As far as Applejack's accent goes, you write it super thick. Almost all of your readers are familiar with her character, and just by pointing it out as a "southern accent" the rest of them will get it. I'd suggest toning it down a bit, but we probably won't see Applejack again for a while anyway.
On another note, I love your story. I wish you updated more, but that's what I get for liking a WiP story...
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I occasionally re-edit my old chapters, mainly looking for little details that bug me, like typos, poor punctuation or too lengthy paragraphs. It's no problem for me to tone down her accent. Thank you for the comment.
As for updating more often, I think I keep a fairly busy schedule on the story, updating a couple of times a week. Honestly, the only reason why this story doesn't update daily is because my friends occasionally invite me over. Otherwise I wouldn't get out period.
I like how you also make SAM his own character not just a companion tag-along that feeds convenient info to Samuel at the best moment.