Two ponies down in three days. No punches being pulled here. Doesn't seem too bothered about killing raiders though. And it looks like she got a witty one-liner off after all. Like a boss!
Well that certainly wasn't what I was expecting. Though, I dunno what I was expecting anyway.
Boss is surely off to a pretty ignominious start to her wasteland adventures.
Afraid I don't have too much else to say about this chapter, though. The use of the radio gave us some exposition to set the stage for where this takes place and when, relative to the FOE timeline. Beyond that, the action scenes actually struck me as kind of flat; very clinical descriptions with bullet counts and everything. Maybe that's just Boss being very attentive to what's happening, but aside from wondering if Fixit was gonna make it or not, it lacked any real tension. Maybe that's just me.
In any case, I'm intrigued to see where this is going. Somehow, I bet that Wheelie will have a habit of showing up every now and again.
2778025 Heh. Sorry if this chapter was kinda boring. Its main purpose is mostly exposition; establishing the timeframe and location and giving a few details about some of the things going on in this corner of the wasteland.
2778177 Well, the chapter itself wasn't boring. Just the action scenes were kinda bland. That aside, you did a good job of setting the stage of the wasteland. And I was intrigued to see Boss' reaction to seeing the outside. Stable dwellers' first steps are something I'm always interested to see, and I like that Boss' was more awe than fear, as I've seen a lot of people just go right for agoraphobia with their dwellers.
Two ponies down in three days. No punches being pulled here. Doesn't seem too bothered about killing raiders though.
And it looks like she got a witty one-liner off after all. Like a boss!
Well that certainly wasn't what I was expecting. Though, I dunno what I was expecting anyway.
Boss is surely off to a pretty ignominious start to her wasteland adventures.
Afraid I don't have too much else to say about this chapter, though. The use of the radio gave us some exposition to set the stage for where this takes place and when, relative to the FOE timeline. Beyond that, the action scenes actually struck me as kind of flat; very clinical descriptions with bullet counts and everything. Maybe that's just Boss being very attentive to what's happening, but aside from wondering if Fixit was gonna make it or not, it lacked any real tension. Maybe that's just me.
In any case, I'm intrigued to see where this is going. Somehow, I bet that Wheelie will have a habit of showing up every now and again.
2778025
Heh. Sorry if this chapter was kinda boring. Its main purpose is mostly exposition; establishing the timeframe and location and giving a few details about some of the things going on in this corner of the wasteland.
2778177
Well, the chapter itself wasn't boring. Just the action scenes were kinda bland. That aside, you did a good job of setting the stage of the wasteland. And I was intrigued to see Boss' reaction to seeing the outside. Stable dwellers' first steps are something I'm always interested to see, and I like that Boss' was more awe than fear, as I've seen a lot of people just go right for agoraphobia with their dwellers.
Good story. Adding to my group.