Frost and Flame

by Snow Shard

(Chapter six) Black phoenix: The flame of the dead

-A monster. A ghost. A curse. And as such we shall be-

Envoyon: "Hey, heyyyy, hello? Hey you alive?"
Rainbow dash: "Uhhhh huh? huh? huh?! why, what where!! who?!"
Envoyon: "Oh just me, Envoyon. you remember me? yeah, how could you forget the awesome Envoyon!" Rainbow opened her eyes to see the dark phoenix pony standing not too far grinning at her. She looked around to get her barrings back, she was in a cave lit with torches, meaning she was ether deep in the cave or it was night. She was hovering above the ground in a sphere of red magic energy and had no clue what happened or why she was here so the most open option was to keep cool and trick him in to telling her what happened.
Envoyon: "So want to know what happened where you are and why?" well that's one way.Rainbow thought to herself in confusion.

Rainbow dash: "Um yeah." She said trying to find some ground to stand on in this ball of energy. With a flash of Envoyon's eyes the ball expanded and a floor of the same energy formed below her. She took a good look at it before landing on the patch of floor glaring at him as he sat there.
Rainbow dash: "I'm watching you." She said with a cautious tone.
Envoyon: "What ever makes you feel better. i got your name when i kidnapped you, so i will just call you Rainbow for now. that ok with you Rainbow?"
Rainbow dash: "No."
Envoyon: "Perfect, Rainbow it is then."
Rainbow dash: "Damn you."

Envoyon: "Well then. Let me tell you a story of the vault and- umm oops wrong story i mean." A cloud of black smoke appeared from seemingly nowhere as Envoyon stepped out of it and smiled he now found himself in a field outside ponyvile past sweet apple acres. The field was full of soft grass the wind blew past him gently and the grass slowly moved back and forth as did the white and blue followers that dotted the field he relaxed as he thought

I may need to see that changeling again sometime. But more importantly i need to deal with the six elements they could be a problem if i run in to them. He then had an idea. Kidnapping! kidnapping never fails but which one to take he then felt somepony coming and ran in to the bushes. A rainbow maned pegasus flew by heading somewhere. That works he thought. he then became a black smoke again and fallowed her from the shadows staying out of sight as best he could until they reached a small cottage with a lot animals

Envoyon: "What the hell? Where is this place and who has this many animals?" He watched the pegasus as she walked up to the door and knocked, a moment later a yellow pegasus with a pink mane came to the door and opened it
Rainbow dash: "Hey Flutershy i'm here to help you fix the bird nests where do i start?"
Flutershy: "Thank you Rainbow it's just that, for some reason a lot of nests have been knocked down somehow." Envoyon then remembered that he had taken down the nests with that blast of wind he did when he was testing his power yesterday Oops he thought.

Rainbow dash: "Yeah no problem." Rainbow smiled at her. Flutershy then gave her the tools for the job and got a second pair for herself they then set off they went to where the nests were hit and got to work. sure Rainbow might not be as good at making nests as Rarity but she could do almost anything with some glue and duck tape Flutershy was amazed with her skill with duck tape. after a few nests Rainbow saw one farther in she called to Flutershy
Rainbow dash: "Hey, i'm gonna go fix that one."
Flutershy: "Ok be careful." Rainbow flew out to the nest and got to work there were 4 cracks in the nest that she glued up quick and returned to find an unconscious Flutershy and before she could react a strange spell hit her and she pasted out.

Envoyon: "And that is how you got here don't worry your friend is fine she's probably awake by now and trying to find you, but she will fail."
Rainbow dash: "Well i'm not worried my friends will find me." She said with a confident smile.
Envoyon: "That so? thanks for the tip, now i can just hit six birds with one stone. And i know just how to do this, actually i will make it easy for them. now to go set the trap." With that he closed his eyes then slammed them open he smiled and then his eyes flashed as he and Rainbow vanished.

Twilight was at Flutershy's cottage she had been told of Rainbow's kidnapping and had assembled the others as she attempted to find the magic energy of the one who took her. Just then she found it, she was familiar with it as well it was Envoyon
Twilight: "I found them but, the one who took her was Envoyon." They looked at each other thinking for a moment then they all agreed it had to be done they could not leave Rainbow. Before going Twilight got the elements from her home just in case and they set out in to everfree from the cottage. they did not need to go that far before Twilight could feel where Envoyon was. they stopped in a clearing a large field in everfree this was not normal not in everfree. then they saw Rainbow in the sphere of energy in the center of the field and ran to her Twilight then realized halfway this...was a trap.

Rainbow opened her eyes she was in the middle of a field Rainbow dash: "Where are we!"
Envoyon: "Everfree."
Rainbow dash: "Huh? but everfree is all dark and gloomy."
Envoyon: "What if i told you that there is a way to reverse that?"
Rainbow dash: "What?"
Envoyon: "Awww your so cute when your surprised." She just glared at him before he vanished. After i minute or so her friends showed up she smiled at them she knew they would come and they ran to her but then Envoyon appeared behind them. He chose his targets. With a flash he grabbed Applejack's tail and the two of them were gone were gone he then appeared next to the still trapped Rainbow and his claw lit with a red energy that rendered Applejack unconscious in a second he threw her down beside Rainbow as she gave her best effort to brake the sphere that caged her trying to save her friend

Envoyon: "Hey there."
Twilight: "What did you do!"
Envoyon: "Piff she's not dead"
Twilight: "Let them go!"
Envoyon: "No i'm no fool you need all six to use the elements and i have two. As it stands without the elements you can't beat me so right now i could kill you all--the Princess would try to kill me--but i could i'm going to take the two of them so you can't take me out."
Twilight: "Hold on! wait"
Envoyon: "What?"
Twilight: " What can i do to make you leave them in peace."
Envoyon: "Hmm. oh! one sec" His eyes flashed again applejack's hooves were tied up good in a red magic bonding just in time too she was waking up. She opened her eyes and saw what was going on Twilight motioned to her that it was ok and she calmed down a bit
Envoyon: "Your friends in exchange for you is good i just need one."

Twilight: "fine." She walked over to him and he threw her friends over to the others as he dispelled Rainbow's sphere and Applejack's bonds Twilight then summoned up her courage and magic as she magically transported to her friends and placed the elements on them
Twilight: "NOW!"
Envoyon: "HATREDS CURSE"As they readied the beam Twilight saw all light drain from the area in to Envoyon until nothing but dark was left Envoyon now stood in a black nothingness as he glowed brightly blood red. As they fired he did the same a beam of red energy came from his head the two beams crashed together making an orb in the center of the collision shining and flashing all sorts of colors until Envoyon said
Envoyon: "I hate you.....I STILL HATE YOU REX." With that his power blasted forth not having to use the elements this long before the six ponies had run low on steam and his powerful burst struck through scattering the six as the light returned to the field Twilight looked up and saw Envoyon grab her head as they vanished in to thin air the others just lay asleep.

Twilight woke up to find herself in a cage an old one she was in some sort of ruins a throne room it was destroyed the roof was gone and the columns that once decorated the path to the throne had cracked and broken with age the marble floor had suffered the same fate and the rug leading up to the throne had dried out and become matted and shaggy the throne it's self the fabric had gone with the rug and was dried up and shaggy and was ripped in different places the frame of the throne was made of gold so for the most part it was fine besides some dirt and dust. Twilight began to think how did Envoyon use such a powerful thing without expending too much power such a spell would drain even the Princess, then it hit her she saw something she had been missing and it made her shiver in fear and confusion in front of the throne Envoyon lay on the ground on-longer breathing Twilight gasped as she said
Twilight: "h-he's dead."

Envoyon:"i'm * cough* i'm not.....dead." She held back her scream as he rose up coughing up blood as his breathing returned Envoyon: " at....at least not for good."

Author's Note:

Here it is sorry it took so long took some time for me to get in that zone you know? once again all comments are welcome sure to be some fails i did not see my PC is a bit better now so failures are less lot less enjoy

Comments

[Steben]

Take a look at your summary, and count the number of periods in it. I really think you check up on some articles, like what is a "run-on" sentence.

Not trying to be mean, but there's also this: Special Snowflake Syndrome

[Ryno39]

Good job
Keep it up

[Snow Shard]

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