2091970 Sorry; I'll be the first to admit that it's not necessarily my best work, though this time I think it's compounded by being sick and writing it when I really should have been headed to bed.
Of course, the fact that it's part 2 of the piece also means that most of what was supposed to happen in the scene with done, so it really was raw cloppage. All the same, I suspect that even most of my clop is going to remain clop-lite, character-focused. It seems to be where my strengths lie.
Nicely done. I was wondering when the futa-ponies would rear their heads. Say, do you mind if I borrow that herd-wife term for my stories? It fits a lot better than what I was thinking of using (which was nothing).
Also:
I’d just love to see what happens when you’re both[ trying to blow my mind….”
Before I read the extra chapter, only 900 words? I now know that the clop is gonna feel tacked on. I will read and enjoy it regardless but yeah...
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Sorry; I'll be the first to admit that it's not necessarily my best work, though this time I think it's compounded by being sick and writing it when I really should have been headed to bed.
Of course, the fact that it's part 2 of the piece also means that most of what was supposed to happen in the scene with done, so it really was raw cloppage. All the same, I suspect that even most of my clop is going to remain clop-lite, character-focused. It seems to be where my strengths lie.
Nicely done. I was wondering when the futa-ponies would rear their heads. Say, do you mind if I borrow that herd-wife term for my stories? It fits a lot better than what I was thinking of using (which was nothing).
Also:
You have and extra bracket there after "both".