Pony Pokemon Adventures

by kenneth8112

Rainbow Dash, Turtwig, and the Mysterious Assistant.

Rainbow Dash & Turtwig

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"There was a problem with the transport sir."

"What are you talking about!? What kind of problem?"

"Well sir, they were successfully transported to this world but..."

"Out with it already!"

"They ended up on the edge of Pallet town in the Kanto region."

"..."

"Sir?"

"Go Out There And Bring Them Here!!!"

"Y-Yes sir!"

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Rainbow Dash quickly left the lab and flew to the small clearing where she and her friends woke up. With what the Professor told them about Pokemon She couldn't wait to see how awesome her first Pokemon would be. She tossed the pokeball out a few feet in front of her. A stream of red light emerged as the ball opened, forming the shape of her new partner. The red light flashed once more as the form became a solid creature.

"Turtwig!" The little creature cried as she happily bounced up and down, glad to be out of the pokeball for a while.

Rainbow Dash looked over at Turtwig and couldn't help but let a small tear roll down her cheek as Turtwig reminded her of Tank, she realized that she wouldn't see him again for a long time. She wiped away the tear and looked back at Turtwig, who was now nibbling at a nearby bush. Dash took out her new pokedex and pressed the button on its front, it flipped open and an image of Turtwig appeared on the screen.

The pokedex started to speak up, "Turtwig the Tiny leaf pokemon. Their Shells are made of hardened soil, a healthy Turtwig's shell should feel moist to the touch."

Dash browsed through the pokedex and checked Turtwigs moves and other basic information. She closed the pokedex after seeing all she wanted to see. When she looked back up for Turtwig, she was missing. Dash quickly looked around for Turtwig, until she felt something fall on her from above and bite her mane. Turtwig was playfully latched onto Dash's head nibbling on her mane. After Turtwig got a good taste of the rainbow mane she quickly jumped off and started to lick the ground and wiping off her tongue.

Dash laughed, "Yeah I get that a lot!"

Turtwig finished getting the taste of Dash's hair out of her mouth as she began to look up into one of the trees. Dash looked up as well and saw a couple of berries hanging from a branch. "Oh, did you want one of those berries?" Dash asked.

"Wig!" Turtwig nodded still looking up at the two berries.

Dash flew up and plucked the two berries, they were a light blue color and tough to the touch. She gave one of the berries to Turtwig and watched as she ate the berry. Dash examined the berry in her hoof and took a curious bite. Her eyes lit up as a wonderful array of flavors mixed in her mouth. She stuffed the other half of the berry in her mouth and enjoyed the flavors. She would definitely have to bring some back for her friends to try.

She flew around the trees and after a while she had a pile of a few dozen Oran berries. As soon as she was about to pack up the berries and head back to town, someone started to speak from behind her.

"Good to see you're awake."

Rainbow Dash turned around to see a person walk out from the tree line. He was tall, skinny, had blue hair, dark green eyes, wore a long lab coat, black shirt, and blue jeans that had several pokeballs clipped on his belt. Dash had a bad feeling about this guy, something about him felt wrong.

He continued to speak, "I'm glad that there were no problems with the transport itself." He reached into his pocket and took out a small device on which he started to type. "I guess we will just have to tweak the output a little bit. We don't want our subjects ending up in the wrong place again." He finished with the device and put it back in his pocket.

"Who are you?" Dash spoke up before this guy could start ranting.

"Oh!" He looked back at Dash, "Where are my manners." He took a bow as he introduced himself. "My name is Jace, my boss brought you to here from your world." He reached into his coat and took out a metallic rod, "I'm going to have to bring you and your friends back to our hideout."

"There's no way I'm going to come with you so don't even bother asking my friends." Dash took a defensive stance as Turtwig stood in front of her ready to protect her new trainer.

Jace adjusted his glasses a bit, "I'm afraid I wasn't asking." He flicked the rod and it extended into a stun rod and sparked with electricity. He then tossed out one of his pokeballs, releasing a Beldum that began to charge at Rainbow Dash and Turtwig.

Dash Picked up Turtwig and began to fly just above the treetops. Turtwig began to struggle in her hoofs, "What?... Don't tell me you actually want to fight those two!?" Turtwig looked up at her and confidently nodded. "Alright good, cause I was planning on it." Dash smiled, "You take the other pokemon and I'll get Jace." Turtwig nodded and the two were ready.

"You can't hide forever Dashie! If I can't take you back, I will just have to go find one of your friends and take them!" Jace taunted.

Hearing this, Dash quickly flew back down and dived toward the Beldum, who was charging at them again. Dash let go of Turtwig and started charging at Jace. Turtwig turned and withdrew into her shell as the Beldum hit. The Beldum bounced off of Turtwig's shell, Turtwig taking little damage, the two now facing each other on the ground.

Dash charged headfirst towards Jace ready to strike. Jace's stun rod sparked as he stepped out of the way, Dash missing her mark. Jace laughed, "you're going to have to try harder then that."

"Shut it!" She yelled back turning around and charging after Jace again.

Jace once again stepped out of the way this time striking Rainbow Dash with the stun rod on her back leg. She spun out of control and crashed into a nearby tree, dropping a few more Oran berries on the ground. Jace started to walk toward her slowly, "We've been studying you and your friends for weeks, we know all about you."

Dash got back up and hovered up out of Jace's reach, "you know nothing about us!"

Jace continued walking toward Dash's crash spot, "I guess the regular voltage isn't enough to knock you out." he twisted the handle of the stun rod and more sparks flew off the rod. Rainbow Dash flew in again to try and hit Jace. Once again he stepped out of the way but instead of hitting her with the stun rod, Jace punched Dash as she flew by. The impact sent Dash crashing into the ground. "Tsk, Tsk, Tsk. Didn't you learn that doesn't work?" He started to walk towards her again and started laughing, "Isn't this exciting? It's just like one of your Daring Doo adventures you love to read. The only thing missing is your miraculous rescue." He got close and crouched down looking the injured pony in the face, "It's too bad there's nobody around to save you." He raised the stun rod in the air as Dash closed her eyes.

She was surprised when nothing happened, she opened her eyes to see Turtwig latched onto Jace's head, and his stun rod on the ground. He struggled trying to get the pokemon to stop biting his head, as Dash looked over to see the Beldum fainted. She took this moment and started flying around Jace as fast as she could, creating a miniature rainbow tornado around the two. Jace threw Turtwig, as Dash caught her and held her close continuing to create the tornado around Jace. Dash went faster and faster pulling in plenty of leaves and oran berries scattered around the forest, the Beldum included.

The tornado lifted Jace and Beldum into the air and launched the two in seperate directions. Beldum flew off somewhere closer to town. Jace flew off farther into the forest but disappeared before hitting the treeline. Dash slowed down and fell to the forest floor, tired. Turtwig made her way out from under Dash and stumbled to a nearby bush. Dash looked up and saw Turtwig gathering berries.

Dash looked back to see a large burn streak running down her leg where Jace struck her. She felt a tug on her mane and looked back at Turtwig. There was now a good stack of 10 or more berries in front of her. In a weak voice Dash told Turtwig, "Thanks kid but I don't think a snack is going to help right now."

Turtwig bonked Dash on the head and pointed at the berries again. Giving in, Dash ate a few of the berries. She instantly felt her strength come back to her. She finished off the pile and stood back up, "That's incredible!" She flapped her wings a bit, "I guess these berries can heal too. Man these things just get better and better!" Turtwig smiled as a ring came from Dash's pokedex.

Dash took out her pokedex and hit the button, the screen flipped up and revealed Professor Oaks face. "Rainbow Dash! I just finished with my work. I need you to come back to the lab." before Dash could respond the call ended

"well I guess we are headed back then." Dash said looking back at Turtwig.

The two then headed back to Pallet Town, Turtwig riding on Dash's back the whole way.

Author's Note:

FINALLY! I re-edited and caught up!

It took forever but now the chapter should read a lot better then it did before.

once again any edits I missed, anything not making sense, or if you just want to say good job, drop a comment.

Comments

[bflask1]

first comment woohoo! super excited to see the rest of Mane 6's starters

[LuftRaptor]

ah pok'emon so many happy memories

[GetJinxed]

2044310I'm with you there

[Forderz]

Your PoV, third person limited, should stick to the same character in a scene. Don't jump from turtwig to Dash and back unless there's a line break.

Why would Jace wait until now to try and collect the ponies? His group brought them over! Unconscious! Why didn't they do whatever they wanted to do with the ponies before?

Rainbow Dash wouldn't be one to let others fight her battles for her. You've already established ponies as somewhere between a person and a Pokemon, with Dash being sucked into the pokeball and digesting the oran berries. Let her physically attack Jace as Turtwig takes on Beldam.

And if you were hoping for Jace to be an interesting billion, mission failed. "Devious face?" Literally kicking the dog as he runs off? Being incompetent enough to get beaten by a virgin trainer and an untrained Pokemon?

He's a mustache short of being a card carrying villain!

[kenneth8112]

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yeah about that, I wrote most of these chapters in a day or two so there is a ton of editing I need to do sometime soon.
-I wanted the story to progress at a quick pace to make readers feel like their progressing, I fear if i stay in one town for too long the reader will just skip around while reading waiting for stuff to happen.
-Tracy's reaction I will admit was a little too calm i will go about editing that later.
-as for the EoH and the champions there are 6 of each (if you don't count red and blue, there's Lance, Steven, Wallace, Cynthia, Alder, and Iris)

2071981
-Tracy's reaction (as stated before) needs to be edited
-Moms reaction I'm going to keep due to me wanting her to be good source of information and an understanding mother. plus i will explain in later chapters why she doesn't freak out.
-also thanks for the complement.

2072038
to be honest i rushed this chapter pretty quick without explaining a lot.
-the PoV issue will be edited at a later date
-Why the group didn't use the pony's before was because they didn't physically bring them over, they used teleportation to bring them over. They weren't ready for tracking them so they sent Jace out to get them.
-I don't write in RD's personality a lot so I'm still working on quality issues.
-about Jace... yeah i kinda flopped on that one, i have no idea what i was thinking when i wrote "devious face" that was a big mistake on my part. i really rushed the battle and the end chapter.

Overall thanks for your time and effort, i see that i need a lot of editing in order for this to be done. Your input is really going to help me fix this.

[Forderz]

Hey man, I just do what I can to help others improve. I like a good crossover as much as the dude, and sometimes that means helping a few along.

[skyscraper123]

2074988 How can a pokemon trainer help in a battle? will eventually the pokemon get too strong and she will have to focus on getting help from her pokemon, and how can she directly change the surroundings? I know they are peopole but I am not sure what the battles will be like, if you can tell me that would be great.

[kenneth8112]

2090263
Okay so, this story is as if pokemon were real, real situations and what not. so if the trainer has the capability to help out in a battle then they can, it's not going to be limited to how the game is. so you will possibly see a martial artist master fighting alongside his Lucario or people pointing guns at eachother. with the way im portraying this world, pokemon are there and people aren't as nice as they are in the anime or the games.

Pokemon are already Over powered as it is, and a trainer helping out is a double edge sword, they can help win in an unofficial match, but they run the risk of getting hurt. Also when the match is official and there's a judge working, no help from the trainer would be allowed.

Changing scenery? i know i rushed the chapter somewhat but im pretty sure i made it clear that RD went into the forest to train. (if you could give me an example where i did change the scenery without knowing it that would help.)

[skyscraper123]

2092959 Sorry the "changing the scenery" part I meant when Rainbow Dash kicked up the dust cloud.

[RainbowTheTankEngine]

>> kenneth8112 will Beldum become RD newest pokemon?

[Changeling-Drone]

that poor beldum maybe one of the mae six or oak will find it but until then

[Black Hoof]

It seems this story was mistakenly upated without new chapters.

[Nataniel]

hurr
>you got new mail!
>new chapter
>*click*
>no new chapter!
FFFFUUUUUU!

[kenneth8112]

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2930048
sorry about that slipped and hit publish instead of edit.

just a little update, it needs like 3 more paragraphs to be finished. going to be kinda short saddly, but dont worry people, im back to writing again.

edit: the chapter is finished now

[shamalamb218]

Bravo on the chapter. I honestly think you did pretty good on RD's personality, ecspecillay see as you said in an older comment, that you weren't used to doing RD's. So, congrats For this chapter... 3 spikestaches on doing a good RD!