"Him"

by RBDGabe

One Day In The Park

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This is my first fanfic please give me constructive criticism and be a Grammar Nazi.
Btw I had this finished but then had to rewrite due to me pressing the Google Docs button by accident.

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I couldn't believe it, everypony was bleeding to death and it was all my fault.
I guess I should start from the start and how we got into this mess.

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It was a warm summers day in Ponyville so Rainbow, Pinkie, Fluttershy and I all decided to go flying in the park.
Pinkie had to use her flying contraption and we had to convince Fluttershy to come out of her comfort zone, which is now something I regret doing.
(My name is Singing Star and I'm a Pegasus.
So we were flying around in the warm Summer Sun until "He" appeared.
Little did we know that he would be a big part of our lives.
"He opened a portal that sucked everypony in.

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We were transported onto earth and turned into humans who could fly.\
Pinkie and Rainbow were flying around doing tricks, even Rainbow was impressed with Pinkie.
Pinkie was so happy she could finally fly without a contraption that she didn't notice she had transformed into a human!
Rainbow didn't care because all she wanted to do was fly around and do tricks.
Fluttershy fainted at the sight of a new world.
I, well I was trying to control the group and get Fluttershy to come to because I knew something was wrong.

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Next Chapter: Exploring Earth
How will the ponies survive on earth?

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Comments

[blunt destiny]

Hmm not long chapters but you did say that. I 4 1 am going to read this and see what its likjr.