• Member Since 9th Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 25th, 2014

RBDGabe


I am a brony and I love Minecraft, I also am a gamer.

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It all started with just a day in the park until..... "He" was there.
All the time...... "He" was there.
Will Rainbow Dash Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie be able to get out of the Alternate Dimension?

Also these are just short around 500 word chapters because I'm not good at writing 1,000 words. :D

I only own my OC Singing Star.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

actually it's not bad but it is VERY rushed it sounds more like some kind of thought and not a story you should write more around the "thought" it's far too rushed but it's actually not bad at least not 2 stars bad

i'm tracking it because i think with more describing words it would be really good please don't stop writing, but write more describingly

I haven't even read it, but don't you think you should have an 'Alternate Universe' tag if it's in a random Alternate Dimension?

Oh wait, those two are two different things.

Yeah I'm going to edit it because I'm not that good at wrighting like 1,000 words I'll just make them shorts.

Also it was very rushed
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I've only got to the first sentence of Courage D: lolz.

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It was meant to be just a portal to earth, *facehoof* about myself.

On Hiatus UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE!

Hmm not long chapters but you did say that. I 4 1 am going to read this and see what its likjr.

Whoa! Wait there is something wrong with the neclases *quickly clicks chapter 4* she you there!

I mean see you there

Damn u I thought this would be a good chapter as well

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