I really enjoyed this. Its suggestive but not vulgar, and was written beautifully. Definitely painted a picture into my mind as I read. I look forward to more.

5/5 Moustaches good sir.

Well written with an engaging storyline. I like where this is heading, and it sets a nice stage. The author has built a solid foundation and has done a great job of capturing a snapshot of the inner working of a spa-pony's mind in all the critical aspects. A tip of the hat to you.

I agree with the above comments.

its like i was there
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9 out of 10

i really like this, plz continue!

An interesting portrayal and idea well executed. Bravo.

Also prompts hilarious mental exchanges in my head.

"Gonna do her."
"No we talked about this."
"Come on, she's practically comatose. We're nearly done. They call it a happy ending for a reason."
"Don't do it."
"Ima do it!"
"Don't you do it."
"We should've given her a pillow. Then she'd have something to bite."
"No wait stop why do you always do this"