Erhmagursh......Sorry, What I meant to say was great chapter! Just one thing...

Its simplistic beauty had only two explanations for the rainbow-maned mare: Either Spitfire was a truly

You just kinda leave this off here, I don't know if that was intentional...
Other wise, great job!

1744487 Oh crap! It was really late at night when I was writing this, so I forgot about that! Hang on, I'll go fix it...

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Fixed! Sorry...

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Much better, make sense now! c:

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Thanks! Any favorite parts or lines in it?

good job

I've just noticed this has a "sad" tag...please don't make it sad!

I don't like sad stories

I can't wait to see where this goes

where she was found in a cardboard box by a creature that Lyra had always talked about.

Did I really just see a "My Little Dashie" reference? I honestly did not see that one coming!