Twilight Sparkle is stranded in the mirriads of parallel worlds for three hundred years. Hostile realities try to kill her in the most brutal and devious manner, but every time she survives, a part of her former self dies...
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I'm guessing this picks off after her last adventure in chapter 6.2?
Also why did you make Celestia and Luna act like idiots? Seriously there kinda making me angry, especially Celestia considering that they had some kind of mother daughter relationship going on.
It's also surprising how much she is willing to talk about her past, with how much she went through, one would assume she has severe PTSD and lots of trauma. I would also guess with what she went through, it would take hundreds of years of therapy just to return back to the way she was, or close to the way she was,, she will never be the same again.
Also with the guards surrounding the Castle, Twilight's friends and family with ask questions eventually.
Also Celestia and Luna seriously needs to understand that if she really wanted to escape or even blown up the planet, she would have done it already with very little to no effort.
They also need to accept the fact that Twilight is powerful and the only way to negotiate with Twilight is to speak calmly without escalating the situation, which is what Celestia and Luna did throughout the entire conversation.
Seriously, if they were police officers, they would be fired.
So far my second favorite character is Starlight Glimmer in this story, Celestia and Luna are my least favorite characters.
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Ya, Twilight's reaction to the whole thing was calm.
The way you wrote Twilight is actually amazing and they way she reacts to situations is understandable.
In this chapter , she kinda reminded me of how Sombra would probably react to getting captured, they way Twilight just responds to Celestia and Luna as if they are not even a threat or only see there situation as a "oh whelp" rather than an "I'M DOOMED" situation.
It was pretty entertaining to watch to say the least.
I don't really like how Celestia reacts in this situation, she also needs to look at the situation in first person than third person, she needs to quastion herself "How would I react in this exact situation?" and "what would have I done differently if I could?"
It also annoys me that they don't even put into consideration that Twilight litterly saved Equestria several times! It's like Celestia throws all that out the window and basically just chooses to pretend she's talking to someone she never met in her life rather than acknowledging that she raised her, that she knows her, that she helped saved Equestria and the world.
I hope there relationship gets better, at the moment though, I'm more curious how Twilight's relationship with Starlight Glimmer will work out.
She seems to adore Twilight and looks up to her as an idol, Twilight's friends seem to be more understanding.
Discord? I wonder how he will react to meeting Twilight again.
I'm also curious what his reaction is to meeting something that's even more powerful than him.
Can't wait to read more, hopefully everything works out ok.
Feel like this chapter title aimed at Celestia more than Twilight
and is Tuperasophobia a make-up word? I try to search the word on google and found nothing
so she used to see Alicorn as her Prey? she was ready to kill Celestia just because she "feels" auras of murder, threat, and obvious rage.
And the most horrifying thing is she just recently "stopped hunting"
sounds like she making an excuse to get on with murdering. If this is her "method" to harvest the Horns:
then I don't think she is that good and fair. Justify that people try to kill her, but she actually starts it first
I think it's "Nightmare Moon" no "Knightmare Moon" Leaving that aside and while negotiation could be better, I guess Twilight decided to be nice, as said she knew too much about the princesses and I imagine they could be for hours talking about the skeletons hidden in the wardrobe by each other. Celestia and Luna as rulers should have many of them, and there is also what she said that not even Tirek is treated that bad.