Spike sparkle solaris, the adopted son of princess celestia and Twilight Sparkle is like usual helping his friends in a battle against evil, however an unknown magic makes a paralell version of his friends appear! , and why can they fuse with him?!
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I have read the whole story so far, shouldn't it be each one of the alternates the one who tell their stories? Ever since the Mane 6 began to interrogare the alternate Rainbow Dash it seems like she knows eceryone's stories since it was never stated that any of the other alternates have regained concience or are even in the same room at all, you pretty much forgot they exist as characters and they should be the ones who tell their own story.
Also, it seems that the Alternate Rarity have a high probability of actually making her version of Sweetie Bot in an mad grief-fueled bout of science.
Outside of that the concept is interesting and recomend you to give the other alternates their own dialogues explaining their situation.
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First of all thank you for seeing my story and the feedback!. Now about what you comment about, there is multiple reasons why in my story Alternate Rainbow knows or tells the very basic parts of the backstories of her friends (some of the reasons are spoiler so if you do not like to spoil yourself skip this)
1.- After a properly made volund (no, the first volund of spike does not count. It needs to have both or all the awareness of all parts to be "proper" volund) parts or big fragments of : memories, emotions and abilities among other things are "shared" between the parties. Remember a volund is pretty much literally to "bound souls together".
2.- Just like you or me, one can know to an extent the past of our friends, even more when in war times is key to know from where and were your commrades come from. This is specially important in synergy of a team.
3.-My original idea was to basically make a summarized small statment of what Stella (rainbow alternate) knew of what her friends past was and THEN expand it only for the viewers knowledge in a similar matter but i think this way is better. For now anyway.
4.- About the Sweetie bot thing, actually you are kind of spot on. Abundance is basically ironmare from her universe so yeah, expect a AI based on her death sister altough its not THAT advanced.
5.-I will consider what you mentioned and maybe either when i finish the story or later rewrite it so each alternate tells her story. Then again it is an option.
Once again thanks for your feedback and read! it means a lot bruh.
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You're welcome, Still love how this story is turning out so I'll wait patiently for the updates.
I see your point with the Volund which can be resumed in essence as a fusion, each person have glimpses of the other memories and with the girls fusing with Alternate Spike, AKA: Crown. Then each one of them would eventually get to see everyone's memories when they fuse with Crown since he is pretty much living their memories as well, then when they fuse with him they get the memories of Crown living each ones memories. So I guess Spike is currently out of commission as his mind is organizing everyone's memories incluiding Crown's.
Now I do wonder if as the way you described Alternate Rarity, AKA: Abundance; Would she have developed a way to always have her version of Sweetie Bot AKA: Charming Siren (or it would be Charming System? Bot? MK. ?) with her at all times? From pocket dimension to nanobots which would have make her double as Abundance Battle Armor like Iron-Man's Mk.50 armor. Still when Abundance see Sweetie Belle for the first time, I'm sure she wouldn't ever want to separate from her, even being more over-protective for her health and well-being than even Rarity and her family. (Bonus Points if Sweetie and Charming Siren bot Mk.? become instant "twins" for Abundance delight and Rarity's internal horror for the fate of her fabrics!)
Great job so far, keep it going!