“Oy!” AJ cut in. “Ain’t no pony’s gonna badmouth mah friend like that. Try it again, ‘n Ah’ll slap the shit out ‘f ya.”
Still quaking in fear as he clung to the root, Dusk finally cracked an eye open to look up. No mare had ever threatened to hit him before, as such things simply weren’t done. More surprising than the mare’s words was her unexpectedly radiant smile.
“Dusk, yer one of the bravest stallions Ah’ve ever met. Ah can tell how scared ya are. Yawl’ve been shakin’ like a leaf since this trip started, but that’s why yer brave. Yer facin’ yer fear ta do what has ta be done. That’s the honest truth, ‘n if yawl don’t know that’s the literal definition ‘f bravery, then Ah’m gonna take yer bookworm card right after Ah’m done smackin’ ya. Hear me?”
Celestia wouldn't like that, and would have tan your hide than to let you smackin Dusk like that.
Celestia wouldn't like that, and would have tan your hide than to let you smackin Dusk like that.
Awesome chapter! And I think you did fairly we all considered. Honestly Twilights ridiculously smart so him being trope savvy isnt that far-fetched.
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She wouldn't actually hit him. Gals hitting guys is immoral. She's just telling him what he needs to hear.
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Glad to hear it.
As a autistic person i can confirm the twilight Is pretty autistic like los level 1 to 10 she Is 2 or 3 sometimes
But dusk Is More like 3 to 4
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I take that as a compliment!
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I hope for next parts be so amazing....hope he deal whit trixie les....you know rough i feel twilight really ruin trixie life on first meting
Probably dusk enjoy some "partie magic" all have the rights to do magic like they want
What if trixie buy the alicorn amulet as a gift to dusk shine and if he use it he can control it because never a male hace use it before ?
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No real plans on her yet, but I know I want to do something different from the show.
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On the way.