Tales of Equestria: The Golden Sun

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Hamburgertime

Hamburgertime #1 · Nov 17th, 2023 · · ·

an alternate verison of Equestria. Humans and ponies once raged war.

It's 'waged', and also these should be one sentence, which is an error that shows up multiple times in just the story description.

Having read previous stories by you, I know this is uncommon, so maybe this needs another proofread?

That Other Writing Guy

That Other Writing Guy #2 · Nov 17th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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I fixed thank you for telling me. I think it was just me writing this late night and my brain wanting to post cause just love ideas for the fic. lol

Hamburgertime

Hamburgertime #3 · Nov 17th, 2023 · · ·

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Hey, happy to help! And remember, energy-drink fueled midnight inspiration needs coffee-fueled daytime editing.

Solver

Solver #4 · Nov 17th, 2023 · 1 · ·

An interesting start, I look forward to what this story will bring.

Ciphers

Ciphers #5 · Nov 17th, 2023 · 1 · ·

now I need some of human history too, where did they come from, did they just "suddenly exist" for some reason, or did they live on the land as long as the ponies and they expanded and met each other?
the humans also decided to leave everything to cross the sea, which I remind you that they know nothing about what is above the sea. Why do they have to make a deal with the ponies that for sure the ponies get the better end of the deal? The Ponies-human war shows that both sides suffer greatly means no one is stronger in the war, why make a deal like that? Unless the demon turn Human land into a wasteland I could see something like this happen, let people abandon their homeland, the land that they live for a long year that easy is weird

King Cosmos and Alexander Lionheart The First king of the free men met on a dead battlefield alone one winter’s night. A deal was struck that night. Alexander agreed to help the ponies destroy the demons in exchange for supplies and boats to cross the great sea. He would move his people to the other side of the world away from all of this. King Cosmos accepted this deal.

I guess the ponies really good at producing goods, given that humans outnumber them 5 to 1, meaning they have to give humans a TON of supplies, somehow equestrian economy still works fine, Horseconomics, BABY