I was slightly disappointed by the usage of translation magic. Why? Because from my reading experience it's a cheap and lazy way of making first contact easier, that's both my and some's opinion. But as I continue reading that disappointment turns into praise due to how good your writing is.
Most stories I've read the author introduces language barrier problem and instantly invalidate/solve it by the usage of translation magics and never mentioned it again. Your story however maintains that problem consistently by establishing that only and all changeling know the spell which make Dory's and the changeling role even more important and also make the Terrans rely on them until the main forces arrive and they could get some kind of translation machines/devices work on. This is a 10/10 wrting right here. Not many can keep their story this consistent both from lore and plot wise.
From the dialogue and interaction I can see that Discord and quite possibly Celestia know about Braxis/Khyrador and have some connections to the Protoss. These details really makes for quite a good foreshadowing and keep the story interesting and keep the reader head thinks deeply and theorize.
I was slightly disappointed by the usage of translation magic. Why? Because from my reading experience it's a cheap and lazy way of making first contact easier, that's both my and some's opinion. But as I continue reading that disappointment turns into praise due to how good your writing is.
Most stories I've read the author introduces language barrier problem and instantly invalidate/solve it by the usage of translation magics and never mentioned it again. Your story however maintains that problem consistently by establishing that only and all changeling know the spell which make Dory's and the changeling role even more important and also make the Terrans rely on them until the main forces arrive and they could get some kind of translation machines/devices work on. This is a 10/10 wrting right here. Not many can keep their story this consistent both from lore and plot wise.
From the dialogue and interaction I can see that Discord and quite possibly Celestia know about Braxis/Khyrador and have some connections to the Protoss. These details really makes for quite a good foreshadowing and keep the story interesting and keep the reader head thinks deeply and theorize.
I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapters.