I've finished reading the first 3 chapters and gotta say they're very well written. The story feels fast paced but not rushed and also tell the urgency of the situation they're in. The interactions between characters feel very natural and go with the flow of the story without breaking immersion. Along with the explanation of a lot of StarCraft lore through dialogue and discussion between squad members without feeling like an info dump is really hitting al the good spot. That's my thought so far, I can't wait to see what's to come in the next chapters. Keep up the great work.
I've finished reading the first 3 chapters and gotta say they're very well written. The story feels fast paced but not rushed and also tell the urgency of the situation they're in. The interactions between characters feel very natural and go with the flow of the story without breaking immersion. Along with the explanation of a lot of StarCraft lore through dialogue and discussion between squad members without feeling like an info dump is really hitting al the good spot. That's my thought so far, I can't wait to see what's to come in the next chapters. Keep up the great work.
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Hey, thanks! It's been an idea I've had rattling around in my head for a while and wanted to work on honing my skills here.