The amount of downvotes in this is depressing, it’s obviously just because they don’t like the subject matter.

Personally I’m not a big fan of scat, but I do love intense kink stories and degradation so I read anyway. It’s written well, only mistake I found was when you first described the design of the porcelain toilet, you said the same line again in the same paragraph.

Either way, keep writing kink, sorry there’s so many dummies on this site that downvote because they see the scary kink words lmao

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Oops, thanks for pointing that out - I'll fix that! I'm happy you enjoyed it ^^ I don't really care about the downvotes/upvotes with this kinda stuff, I expect to get lots of downvotes when I'm posting these things :P