Filthy Rich, an interesting relationship. I'm surprised no one else knows what's going on, or at least from Nora's perspective.
Lyra the stalker ... boundaries are definitely needed.
Nora, you have have to start implementing such work rules: when off the clock, stay off the cock (clit/tit).
Please Lyra, don't be the Joker (2019).
Time to ask Rarity for a backpack?
Chapter 5
Corrections
"much custom at this" customer
"He brough his snout" brought
"sensation brining her" bringing
Ah, thank you for confirming Quill that you are a changling.
Wait worked nights ... Luna? Why did it take until the last 5 paragraphs to the end for me to even consider it. If so this is a very intriguing twist.
Chapter 6
Nice to see Gilda and surprised to see her doing such work ... is this a competition that Dash knows about?
Dang it, now all I hear are bill and ted from these 3 dude/gym bros.
Wait do griffins have 2 or 1 holes? I guess they have 2.
... You know I would not have been surprised if Glinda pooped on Nora's face during her victory clean up. Never mind, I take it back after Glinda backs Nora before and after the gangbang.
Also, I really hope something comes from the dudebros, future clients or competitions.
Other Comments
How is Nora getting protein? Eggs? Or hand-swept with magic?
What would ponies think of riding crops? Are bits (part of the tack) considered bdsm in Equestrian culture?
With enough support, would Nora do sex "missionary" with a stallion?
More tags Egging (changelings) Double pen (as in 2 penis in 1 hole. Probably not possible with ponies unless magic is involved)
Also, I was very surprised that you were able to write Chapter 6 in 2 days. Inspired? Or backlog?
I was using 'custom' as a noun there, meaning business, so to my knowledge that's correct, but I've tidied up the other errors, thanks for flagging them
Dudebros may come back, probably more as a passing reference than the center of another chapter, but who knows - as it is I've got a bunch of story threads I'm planning on picking up again later on, often from things I wrote on a whim or that are mentioned in passing in, like, a single line of dialogue. I do this to myself
Well, um, I can certainly think of one way she gets protein...
And yeah, backlog is to thank for Chapter 6 being out so quick - I actually had this one written in its entirety when Chapter 5 was only half done, since I was contemplating making it (5) shorter at first.
Appreciate the detailed comment as always - so far you've had a knack for posting right when I'm nearly done with the next chapter, though I may stall the release of this next one since it's basically part 1 of a two parter, and the first part won't really have any clop, but if anyone is dying to see something to hold them over, let me know and I can probably publish it soon.
Great chapter Nora lose in a business aspect But she sure got her itch scratched
Bladder control can go when preparation are lacking, same with anal. Rather surprised the hasn’t a tube of lube for that at her. Better to have it and not needing it than needing it and not having it at hand.
I love this story so far, truly. Awesome work.
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Thank you!
Chapter 4
Filthy Rich, an interesting relationship. I'm surprised no one else knows what's going on, or at least from Nora's perspective.
Lyra the stalker ... boundaries are definitely needed.
Nora, you have have to start implementing such work rules: when off the clock, stay off the cock (clit/tit).
Please Lyra, don't be the Joker (2019).
Time to ask Rarity for a backpack?
Chapter 5
Corrections
"much custom at this"
customer
"He brough his snout"
brought
"sensation brining her"
bringing
Ah, thank you for confirming Quill that you are a changling.
Wait worked nights ... Luna? Why did it take until the last 5 paragraphs to the end for me to even consider it. If so this is a very intriguing twist.
Chapter 6
Nice to see Gilda and surprised to see her doing such work ... is this a competition that Dash knows about?
Dang it, now all I hear are bill and ted from these 3 dude/gym bros.
Wait do griffins have 2 or 1 holes?I guess they have 2.
... You know I would not have been surprised if Glinda pooped on Nora's face during her victory clean up.Never mind, I take it back after Glinda backs Nora before and after the gangbang.
Also, I really hope something comes from the dudebros, future clients or competitions.
Other Comments
How is Nora getting protein? Eggs? Or hand-swept with magic?
What would ponies think of riding crops? Are bits (part of the tack) considered bdsm in Equestrian culture?
With enough support, would Nora do sex "missionary" with a stallion?
More tags
Egging (changelings)
Double pen (as in 2 penis in 1 hole. Probably not possible with ponies unless magic is involved)
Also, I was very surprised that you were able to write Chapter 6 in 2 days. Inspired? Or backlog?
-Sky66
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I was using 'custom' as a noun there, meaning business, so to my knowledge that's correct, but I've tidied up the other errors, thanks for flagging them
Dudebros may come back, probably more as a passing reference than the center of another chapter, but who knows - as it is I've got a bunch of story threads I'm planning on picking up again later on, often from things I wrote on a whim or that are mentioned in passing in, like, a single line of dialogue. I do this to myself
Well, um, I can certainly think of one way she gets protein...
And yeah, backlog is to thank for Chapter 6 being out so quick - I actually had this one written in its entirety when Chapter 5 was only half done, since I was contemplating making it (5) shorter at first.
Appreciate the detailed comment as always - so far you've had a knack for posting right when I'm nearly done with the next chapter, though I may stall the release of this next one since it's basically part 1 of a two parter, and the first part won't really have any clop, but if anyone is dying to see something to hold them over, let me know and I can probably publish it soon.
11721347
Thanks for pointing these out, I'm surprised I let so many errors slip in one chapter. I've fixed them now.
And thanks for all the support in the comments. Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
Great chapter
Nora lose in a business aspect
But she sure got her itch scratched
Bladder control can go when preparation are lacking, same with anal. Rather surprised the hasn’t a tube of lube for that at her.
Better to have it and not needing it
than
needing it and not having it at hand.