Following the battle with Discord and Ponyville’s near destruction, Twilight explores the Everfree to investigate lost chaos magic in the cursed forest. However, what she finds in the ruined castle proves more shocking than any amount of chaos magic.
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Okay I haven't finished the first chapter yet because being busy sucks, but this is a really awesome concept, and the pacing and details are perfect. Gonna come back to this later tonight.
Started good, but the fight is gone our main oc after so little time. A warrior strong enough to match a Alcorn while injured now downgraded to simply doingbguard duty by a pony younger and weaker then herself.
It just feels so wrong to me after they were built up so much in the beginning. I'm sorry but I just can't read this story after such a bait and switch.
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I years lived Luna is older than her most likely.
Also what kind of fight do you wish for her to have, if it’s not an au where the rulers are tyrant I see little reason for her to keep going as she was…
This was never going to be a warrior in a doom esque world filled with monsters. This is not a warriors world anymore.