Thank you for everything, if you dislike this then I apologize, and I wish you luck finding other interesting reads out there.

"The Elements of Harmony." she began, " are six supernatural artifacts representing subjective aspects of harmony. They are six: Honesty, Kindness, Laughter, Generosity, Loyalty, and Magic. They have been wielded on rare occasions, particularly during events marked by danger and anarchy as a last resort to restore and enforce the balance of peace and order. However, the effects of their use are generally temporary and non-lethal, usually a form of banishment or imprisonment."

Luv your summary of the Elements of Harmony.

Good story, however, some editing is very much needed. Punctuations are off here and there, along with the incorrect use of various words.

Welp I'm interested

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I like it as well

This story has already been done. Did you get permission to re-write it?

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Where the original

Of course it has, name a single story with a concept that hasn’t been done, I don’t need any author’s permission because it is my work that I worked hard on.

I don’t mind if you dislike my story, but don’t try and accuse me of taking someone else’s work.

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Let me rephrase and explain.

I read a story in which Celestia was given no choice but to kill her love back in the early days of Equestria. Instead, she sends him to another world and he remains there being raised from childhood with no memory of her. They bring him back to Equestria and she tries to make him remember their life together before the incident.

I suppose this is only similar. It was just so close with the time travel stuff it sounded like you had taken the idea and made it your own. Write it if you want, I don't even remember the name of the story I am talking about. I can't search it and I don't have it saved in my favorites or anything. So it's not like I can say you're straight up stealing the idea.

Keep writing.

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There's always one of those type of people.

He's what now