too much powder and you got a hand grenade "As for you Cedar Pines, it seems very clear that you stole your classmates original design for his project and tried to plagiarize it as your own. Therefore, you are disqualified from the fair," Celestia said without so much as batting an eye to cedar while turning her back. "I will be notifying your parents about this incident as well." remind me of this
Stupid question, but why didn't John retrieve his original gun once everyone found out it was stolen, and why wasn't Cedar arrested for theft on the spot?
I have a feeling down the road Cedar will grow from bully to villain. Blaming the protagonist for his life going to hell because of his own mistakes, attempted murder on said protagonist for revenge, and accidental self mutilation from trying to carry out revenge, those are big red flags.
Ffs, really? A known antagonist towards John, stole what is now known to everyone, including the princess AND her guards, as an incredibly dangerous weapon which can kill with ease. They then proceeded to humiliate him, and yet they didn't even attempt to take the known stolen weapon from him? A weapon which he could easily use in anger and revenge against John, which he in fact proceeded to do? Seems brain cells are in short supply here.
11625060 So it was purposefully ignored, because plot....... well congrats i guess, because that is honestly one of the laziest things I've ever read in regards to creating a future threat.
More good
Cedar really be coming a villain in this story.
Great chapter by the way, keep it up.
And Cedar Pines keeps going down the Stephen King bully route. Attempted murder? That's prison time fo' sho'.
great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter the moral of the chapter is karma is a bitch
if i was a kid in Equestria i would be invented this rifle
too much powder and you got a hand grenade "As for you Cedar Pines, it seems very clear that you stole your classmates original design for his project and tried to plagiarize it as your own. Therefore, you are disqualified from the fair," Celestia said without so much as batting an eye to cedar while turning her back. "I will be notifying your parents about this incident as well." remind me of this
Stupid question, but why didn't John retrieve his original gun once everyone found out it was stolen, and why wasn't Cedar arrested for theft on the spot?
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Got a plan for that.
I have a feeling down the road Cedar will grow from bully to villain. Blaming the protagonist for his life going to hell because of his own mistakes, attempted murder on said protagonist for revenge, and accidental self mutilation from trying to carry out revenge, those are big red flags.
Ffs, really? A known antagonist towards John, stole what is now known to everyone, including the princess AND her guards, as an incredibly dangerous weapon which can kill with ease. They then proceeded to humiliate him, and yet they didn't even attempt to take the known stolen weapon from him? A weapon which he could easily use in anger and revenge against John, which he in fact proceeded to do? Seems brain cells are in short supply here.
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Or the backstory for a rising threat in the future.
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That was pretty shortsighted, especially for the Princess and the guards.
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So it was purposefully ignored, because plot....... well congrats i guess, because that is honestly one of the laziest things I've ever read in regards to creating a future threat.
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Noted.
I don't think Celestia would ever like creation like that in her Kingdom just imagine what happened for enemies got such a weapon
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I was wondering if Celestia would approve of it when he got the idea, but seems she's ok with it in this fic.
Can't wait to see what happens next great work
So it's "Gifted Youngsters" instead of Unicorns?
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My Xmen Easter egg.
Hehe flintstones reference I love it
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I thought so! Anyways great job on this fic can’t wait for more!