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Ghost Warrior


A man who has seen the world of my little pony and wishes to see what could make it better

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Looks good so far! I look forward to reading more!

I like what I see. Tracking.

beautiful Start, I am looking forward for more chapters. :twilightsmile:

A bit more set up would be nice but not bad

I'm a sucker for wholesome stories! Love it!

I see that title, and I think of this:

The Lord is good to me,
and so I thank the Lord,
for giving me the things I need,
the sun, the rain and the apple seed.
The Lord is good to me.

- The Johnny Appleseed prayer

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I might do something with that. Thank you.

Would've been funny if you named him Johnny Apple Seed. :rainbowlaugh:

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That was my first thought as well

Plz keep going I’m excited to read more!

Is this story based off of the legend of Johnny Appleseed?

Pretty good for chapter 2 can't wait for the third one

This is a great story keep up the good work 👏

Can’t wait to read more this story’s pretty good, glad that Granny saw her mistake and became Johnny’s grandmother. At any rate both are good chapters!

This is a good story has potential to be a webcomic itself, loved the beginning, story is being saved.

wonderful chapter, keep it up.

I get Granny not accepting John at first, after all she hated the Pears for no reason except her family told her to. Glad she came around after spending time with him.

Johnny apples in equestrian Legend. If he sucking from milk from buttercup and she has equestrian magic inside of her will he be able to absorb some of earth pony magic from her milk.

I like the end of the chapter it was sweet

"Oh no no no no," Buttercup tried to do her best to calm her son down. After five minutes with no progress, she had an idea. "Come stop your crying, it'll be alright. Just take my hand, hold it tight. I will protect you from all around you, I will be here, don't you cry." John started to calm down and held onto his Ma's finger. "For one so small, you seem so strong. My arms will hold you, keep you safe and warm. This bond between us, can't be broken. I will be here, don't you cry." Buttercup started to cradle him and kissed his forehead. "Because you'll be in my heart. Yes, you'll be in my heart. From this day on, now and forevermore." As John started to drift off to sleep, she put him in his sheet crib. "You will be in my heart, no matter what they say." She placed a blanket over him. "You'll be here in my heart, always." John soon started to snore soundly. Buttercup kissed his forehead before drifting off to sleep with her son. "Always."

who left these onions here

it’s a good chapter and a great fic can’t wait to read more, but I’m curious will Johnny find out who he is in future chapters, or others like him? Just asking is all. Great chapter by the way!

I wonder how they will all react when they learn he's an omnivore.

Yay update!

I expected some of the other Apples wouldn't accept John, but not to the point of Bright slugging one of them.

Why is there an adventure tag?

I like the chapter and show what ine would do for family

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It's for the future trust me.

Tbh I'd do the same in Bright Macs place. The moment some disrecpects my child (when i eventually have one) , even family, all bets are off.

Beautifully done I love chapter kept up the good work

Aww happy christmas to them and hope good year. Amazing job on story, I think remember big Mac will be first to come out then applejack later applebloom. I'm happy for them.:pinkiehappy:

More good

I bet you soon enough he's going to be the best looking guy in town. I wonder if he gets older with his natural sweat will be somewhat girl magnet

I had a gut feeling that Cheerilee would be the love interest long before this chapter.

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Did you, now? Well, nice job. I hope any other predictions you have for this story come true.

Great work keep it up :pinkiehappy:

Huh, Cheerilee as a love interest eh? Gotta admit, don't see much of that, not complaining though.

More good

Like the great ending of the chapter can't wait for more

cool chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Among the many stories I'm tracking this is some of the ones I get excited for updates on the most.

Curious how John is having visions of guns, maybe he saw them when he was a baby before he ended up in Equestria, which only raises more questions on the circumstances that led him to the Apple's porch, perhaps his mother was fleeing from soldiers. I can't help but think about the scene in Kung Fu Panda 2 when Po remembers what happened to his village when he was a baby.

I used to be an adventure like you till I took an arrow to the knee

That was funny. Don't swear around the kids and don't lie to them about the words.

I’ll be honest dude, this chapter just took the story in a weirdly different turn. Kinda expected this story to be more slice of life, not this. I don’t know, I guess I’m just sick of seeing HiE who somehow have some hidden skill that gives them an upper hand. Nothing against your story, I’ll probably still read it, it’s just not something I expected is all.

I was worried ponies would start to fear him after effortlessly killing those diamond dogs.

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