nice cant wait for more soon

And so starts a long road.

I can't wait this is going to be awesome.

i do think that all the chapters need to be long one's to get the best out of it

This is what I'm talking about of a good story idea. 👍

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And also have more dialogues and separate paragraphs.

Time to learn the art of patience

"it is by Will alone i set this world in motion. it is by the juice of the Ambrosia that the Body acquires speed, the Blades acquire Stains, the Stains become a Message. it is by Will alone i set this world in motion..."

So begins a story crossed with a game series whose releases jump all over the timeline randomly like Pinkie does. I mean, the game's chronology versus the release dates of the installments goes as Ascension in '13, Chains in '08, Original in '05, Ghost in '10, Betrayal in '07, 2 in '07, 3 in '10, Norse GoW in '18, and Ragnarok in '22.

Only question would be how much of the previously mentioned installments will be included in this story?

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Well he normally follows the time line, only game I think he might pass over would be Betrayal, for that game is a mess, and I am not sure if it's canon. so I looked it up it's canon ignore me.

11607903 How many? I intend to go from the very start to the very end... I have big plans for this story.

It was a peaceful day in the Crystal Empire, under the protective dome that kept everything and everyone safe from the cold and harsh weather that existed in this portion of the world, the Frozen North, and the crystal ponies were happy to have another uneventful day as they went about their business. .

I'm going to take a quote from Silver Quill, here.

I'd like to know whose idea it was to build a city in the Frozen North. Where a magical artifact is the only barrier between its inhabitants and a Frozen tomb. That was not a smart pony. Not at all.
I'd like to point y'all to an excellent book called Ishmael by Daniel Quinn. And one of the very important points that this book makes is that if you know an environment is hostile and you can't naturally adapt, YOU SHOULDN'T LIVE THERE!

I wonder what sort of ramifications this will have on both worlds...

Either way, enjoy the random magical outbursts in your near future, Kratos!