Normally I'd question if you asked the original author if you could "fix" some part of their story. But Mythril is, sadly, no longer among the living, so...

Why did people hate the original story so much?

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Because in the TRUE ORIGINAL. Sunset was basically rape and the principals didn't care how much they were hurting her.

In the end, Sunset rather go through with her 2 months detention than continue with that form of punishment.

Yay! So glad to see this fic back, looking forward to the read!

For those who want to see the full version of the cover image, check out 1642186 on Derpi.

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Okay, this time the downvotes are definitely just people bullying you. I would have been okay with the long description joking that they couldn't contact him on account of his untimely death that they swear they had nothing to do with, but some kind of explanation of the circumstances would be appropriate.

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Looks like the author, again, decided they needed to fix a part of someone else's story. And their comments on that story came two years after we lost Moth. So...

nice work

Nice one , and when come next chapter, out of curious

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Working on it now. Should have it out this week.

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oh ok and take your time