By the way, despite kinda liking this. I do have some criticism here.
Firstly, this feels way too fast paced. Secondly, having these pony knight/kaman rider OC's coming out the blue without much introduction with no back story is a little annoying.
And thirdly, going to an alternate dimension/timeline where Dainn is a good guy, came literally out of nowhere, and will just confused readers like me?
No hard feelings. I just can't enjoy this if it keeps giving me a slight headache on what the heck is going on here?
11313059
*Caribou*
That's the right spelling. No offense.
By the way, despite kinda liking this. I do have some criticism here.
Firstly, this feels way too fast paced. Secondly, having these pony knight/kaman rider OC's coming out the blue without much introduction with no back story is a little annoying.
And thirdly, going to an alternate dimension/timeline where Dainn is a good guy, came literally out of nowhere, and will just confused readers like me?
No hard feelings. I just can't enjoy this if it keeps giving me a slight headache on what the heck is going on here?
11370594
1: The back stories for each of them will come soon
2: We're doing the best we can.
3: I thought it be nice if add an alternate demand Dimension just for this chapter.
I'm sorry if my story is giving you a bit of a headache.
11370681
Yeah, I thought it might fit right in
11370766
I don't know what that means
11370766
He's just using those stories as references. I can assure you that his story is the real deal.
11370639
It's alright. Just take it a little slow.
Nice work I can't wait to see more. :)