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Well this is an...interesting idea. I look forward to seeing the rest of it.

Looks interesting for sure. And a bit of a warning. Ignore anyone who asks if Spike is going to be a Rider. They do it on every Kamen Rider story it seems like.

I like the story good luck with it!

"FOE is both sexist and racist"

Sir, this is a Wendy's...

Open to pitch ideas off of (and assist with ideas and combat scenes if needed).

this is pretty good so far, I'm writing a toku story with a story arc similar to this as well. Can't wait to see how far this story will go.

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Can't wait to see what you make

Just from the description, you have my attention.

BUT, I do have a friend who is anti-brony, but for him he understands that it’s others choice to like it, does he like it, no, will he hate it, yes, will he hate people who like the show, no.

He’ll judge them based off of their actions/interactions with him. So if you want someone who hates the show, but not the people, you can ask me about them and I’ll tell you more about them…in case you want to use them as a cameo in the story because of the way he is,

Stay safe, have fun, and remember to smile.:pinkiehappy:

Even after being in the fandom for a few years, I still don't get fully on the whole Cabirio thing.
But its fun in seeing fics of them getting their butts kicked by crossover stuff, so I think this story will be interesting to see.
Its also nice on seeing lore stuff since I still don't know about FOE fully at the moment.

I wonder if there might be plans for Spike in this?

Also, was the bits I see there based off of God Of War(2018)? Like the Leviathan Axe?

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No spike. He's a sidekick and on the God of War, a bit yes.

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He isn't a sidekick in the show though..

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Yes but tell that to the other readers.

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I don't see anyone else saying he's a sidekick though..

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Good point. Unless he found another Sacred SworDriver and used Ultimate Bahamut Wonder Book.

I have to disagree with you about the representation of anti-Brones. They would not be so invested As to make something is intricate as FOE. If anything they represent the Clop community.

Also I don’t mean offense but Well your hearts in the right place there is often a danger when you post descriptions of your intentions so Blatantly. I just hope that your work doesn’t suffer because of it.

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And about the clop part, it seems to take things too far and stuff.

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Also forgive me for looking into this a little to hard but I’ve always found grievance stories a little irksome.

Don’t get me wrong you can write whatever you want but what separates this from every other FOE revenge fiction that’s been produced? All somebody has to do Is read your description and basically saying “the kamen riders show up and kick Caribou ass. Next!” The problem is that The hero comes in and steamrolls them with little to no resistance. If we know how this is going to go down then why bother reading? Other than those who have a hate on for FOE. The Caribou are usually written as so grossly incompetent they can never win. There are no stakes to the fight. (I am about to read this so maybe I’m wrong.) But under most circumstances the Caribou are so dumb You question how they managed to keep their power.

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I believe it is out of dumb luck or something about the caribou thing

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Just got done reading your first chapter not gonna lie I think my fears are laid to rest. An interesting origin story for Dainn.

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I know, most others don't tell about his origin story

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That's what I said because there's no origin story about Dainn and how he became a tyrant in the first place. I mean Chrome got some of it right on KR Jam about him conquered the Crystal Empire and almost ruled Canterlot if it wasn't for Jam. Plus, he did wrote about Dainn had Discord's power but he didn't tell how he got it.

So the next chapter for Ninjago is next, rightÉ

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That is Kamen Rider accel would please stop bothering me about the Kamen Rider OOO fanfic

By the way, despite kinda liking this. I do have some criticism here.

Firstly, this feels way too fast paced. Secondly, having these pony knight/kaman rider OC's coming out the blue without much introduction with no back story is a little annoying.


And thirdly, going to an alternate dimension/timeline where Dainn is a good guy, came literally out of nowhere, and will just confused readers like me?

No hard feelings. I just can't enjoy this if it keeps giving me a slight headache on what the heck is going on here?

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1: The back stories for each of them will come soon

2: We're doing the best we can.

3: I thought it be nice if add an alternate demand Dimension just for this chapter.

I'm sorry if my story is giving you a bit of a headache.

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He's just using those stories as references. I can assure you that his story is the real deal.

I thought the Knights of Harmony were villains.

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Really? You need to re-read the story dude

Just to recap, whose who in terms of which ponies have which kamen rider sword/abilities

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Flash = Saber = fire

Aqua = Blades = water

Sparks = Espada = lighting

Terra = Buster = earth

Tempest = Kenzan = wind

Maud = Slash = sound

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