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Did you think about maybe let Cozy use Sombra old mind control helmets? Or maybe test subliminal messages? She could test it in Flurry, with how many times it was told that she seem to learn everything like a sponge, put a tape under her bed with a subliminal message like the ones Starlight used in 'Our City' but more like "Obeying Cozy Glow is the best" "The best decision is to not decide, but obey Cozy Glow" and things like that.
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I know there are a lot of ways to do mind control. But I'm already straying from the script by a decent margin. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion as to which mind control method is best, and I've cast a fairly wide net so far.
But it would be very confusing if I just went and used every method there was. While I have used the ones in the script were mentioned, I've also opted for either simplifying the methods where I can, and giving characters who were listed as important something to do.
For example, Stellar Flare's only role in the story was to seduce Sunburst then show up in the climax as if she were super pivotal. Zecora was originally just supposed to have sex with Gallus once stop the potion that she was giving to Sandbar, and then provide Gallus with one potion that does three different things, and then never appear again.
The point I'm driving at is that this is already a very over-complicated story that I have to complicate even more to make it all add up. Adding in even more ways of controlling minds is only going to make it even more difficult to squeeze in all of the details.
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Ok, not a problem, just wanted to offer a couple of suggestions. I didn't know that you had everything in mind