This is a really interesting take on Discord. I've seen something vaguely similar to it in two other stories, but the writing captures Discord's feeling of helplessness really well.
11260597 Wow, really? I have not seen many stories about Discord, but I'm interested about those stories! Do you know their names? I'd love to read them!
I mean, I always tried to find a story about Discord or human turned into a Draconequus, so I decides to make it by my own haha
11260612 I'm going to tell you the names of the two stories that I'm thinking about, but I also strongly recommend that you don't read them so that you can continue to write this one without being influenced by them, since comparing a story to others can mess with artistic vision even if it's unintentional.
Being Chaos by alarajrogers
Chaotic Visage by newbie
Both of these stories have a human turning into Discord and being mistreated in some way, but they are different enough that you shouldn't be concerned with any passing similarities your story might have with them.
11260678 Anything that I could point to in this story for improvement would just be the language issues or little character things. I can always tell what you're going for even if it comes off as clumsy because English isn't your first language. But when Applejack called someone "sweety" or "sweetheart" in the first chapter, it felt weird because she would only call them "sugarcube."
Discord in the show always behaved childishly dispite his apparent age, but your Discord seems more like he still is an actual child at heart who was robbed of a good opportunity to grow or process the loss of his home. He feels especially tragic in this for that little bit of naivety or innocence he still seems to have.
11260710 Well, you're right, but Discord suffering has just started haha!
Nah, but I'll tell you something, in the story there will be big antagonists, but I think that most of y'all already knew it for paying attention to some hints that I gave in a few chapters haha
This is a really interesting take on Discord. I've seen something vaguely similar to it in two other stories, but the writing captures Discord's feeling of helplessness really well.
11260597
Wow, really? I have not seen many stories about Discord, but I'm interested about those stories! Do you know their names? I'd love to read them!
I mean, I always tried to find a story about Discord or human turned into a Draconequus, so I decides to make it by my own haha
11260612
I'm going to tell you the names of the two stories that I'm thinking about, but I also strongly recommend that you don't read them so that you can continue to write this one without being influenced by them, since comparing a story to others can mess with artistic vision even if it's unintentional.
Being Chaos by alarajrogers
Chaotic Visage by newbie
Both of these stories have a human turning into Discord and being mistreated in some way, but they are different enough that you shouldn't be concerned with any passing similarities your story might have with them.
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Ok! I won't read them for now, but i do really like the idea of humans being Draconequus.
I do really appreciate that you answered my question. Thank you! I hope you like the story.
Also, what is your opinion of my story? And what do you think I should improve?
11260678
Anything that I could point to in this story for improvement would just be the language issues or little character things. I can always tell what you're going for even if it comes off as clumsy because English isn't your first language. But when Applejack called someone "sweety" or "sweetheart" in the first chapter, it felt weird because she would only call them "sugarcube."
Discord in the show always behaved childishly dispite his apparent age, but your Discord seems more like he still is an actual child at heart who was robbed of a good opportunity to grow or process the loss of his home. He feels especially tragic in this for that little bit of naivety or innocence he still seems to have.
11260710
Well, you're right, but Discord suffering has just started haha!
Nah, but I'll tell you something, in the story there will be big antagonists, but I think that most of y'all already knew it for paying attention to some hints that I gave in a few chapters haha
continue this story please
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I've been pretty busy lately, but I think that I am going to upload a chapter in one or two days at least.