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Beware.... one should be weary of rousing a wizards wrath! Lest ye be turned into a newt!
On a side note, why is that the go to? Newts are cool. Their cute little lizards with derpy faces and blue gloves.
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They're also highly sought for their eyes as magical components.
Why are there two versions of this story?
I mean, I get that this one has 'mature content,' but the difference is sometimes one or two lines in every other chapter. Some chapters are identical.
When authors do extended cuts of their stories, they're usually just uploading long sex scenes or other extreme content that was left out of the main version. It's like several thousand words added onto specific chapters, not the entire story, again, but with a few more references to biology.
Nothing in this is long enough to justify an entire separate version of the story. And some of the changes are really...tame? I'm not gaining a new understanding from this version, except for Rally occasionally mentioning how much she hates her genitals more and really vanilla sexual references.
If you're reading the teen version, you're not missing out on anything.
You forgot to change the word 'my' near the end of the chapter, and closer to the beginning the word 'a' is used in place of 'an'.