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Not bad I really like this story keep it up
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Thanks, and I intend to.
Speaking of, do you have any suggestions for names for the unicorn and Dragon forms?
11191599
I’m sorry but don’t have any names for them but I hope you come up one
11191620
Well, I don't have any name ideas either, so maybe someone else will have a name. I'm working on the next chapter, and it's gonna be a doozy for a 4th chapter.
him having Ghostfreak is worrying. are we gonna see it go wrong or are we good? also with cadence babysitting him wouldned ben get alicorn from her?
Great job, I'm adding this to my favorites
11191665
Well, since this Ben comes from after he dealt with Ghostfreak after he escaped, and reclaimed the DNA Sample of the alien spectre, I'd say yeah, we're good.
And uh... heheheh, funny story about Cadence, you're gonna love it.
I didn't make her an Alicorn yet, mainly because I'm gonna let a certain event happen that'll be Cadence's crowning moment to when she ascends to Alicorn status.
Plus, I pretty much made it to where The Omnitrix can't recognize Alicorn DNA, because it's so chocked full of magic from the three other pony tribes, it's like a genetic mutation on an arcane level, so it's difficult for the Omnitrix to properly distinguish or find a difference that separates the form from the 3 core pony tribes.
Plus, I don't have an idea as to what Ben's Alicorn form could be the prince of, to give it more depth, so no Alicorn form in this story.
Cadence is very much a Pegasus, but she did hear about what happened when Twilight and Spike touched the watch, and suddenly Ben could turn into a Unicorn and a Dragon, so Cadence is trying to hold off on touching the watch, let alone get near it, lest Ben starts sprouting wings.
11192086
if you go off what the omnitrix was ment to be for ben could be prince of unity. but yea you could have an alicron form later by either having it be a ben wolf situation (ben wolf is in the watch atm right? i havent watched the original in a while) after nightmare moon or have it be that alicrons have to earn it and after he does that magic will allow him and the watch to have alicron dna.
Interesting premise, I’m looking forward to seeing how the story develops.
11192168
It's definitely one of my most ambitious projects to date.
11192147
Yes and no.
Yes, Benwolf/Blitzwolfer is in the Omnitrix, but there's a reason why I had Ben go back to having ten, then twelve transformations, and it's due to how he was brought to Equestria. It's kind of a plot point that develops over time.
Also, Prince of Unity, that's actually clever.
11192252
best i could come up with while not going into twilight and cadence relms. you gonna just have him only use the transform and time out or will he possibly come across the transformation lock function and master control? Also switching transformation directly could be used well
11192272
He'll rediscover Master Control later, right now it's just a matter of trying to re-familiarize himself with his alien powers, as well as acquiring new powers.
11192302
im guessing your gonna have him mess around with his new forms and maby have dimondhead have something new. I forget but dident master control originaly get unlocked by him just messing with the dial? Wasent twilight around 10 during her test?
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I believe so, but ages between species can be hard to compare, so for the time being, Ben and Twilight are both 10, but off screen during a time-skip, Ben did turn 11, so I'm gonna scale Ben's age to his birthday, somewhere in late December, so some time in winter, and try to properly keep it accurate as time in Equestria goes on, so by the time the events of the actual show roll around, Ben will be much older, and have a bit more experience.
Plus, it's odd to say this now, but some of Ben's aliens have changed slightly. What do I mean by this? You'll find out later in the story.